What do you think of this song I wrote...?

Question

He tried to think of what to say

but it was already too late

Tears started to fall down her cheeks

She walks away

You realize that you've lost the game

What happens when the window to your eyes (Chorus)

is shattered like your perfect lies

Then again

who said it was too late to apolagize?

No one seemed to be around

His tears buried in the ground

Her silence stolen from his heart

The end was the only place to start

Chorus

Someday he said moved on through

Somewhere over the rainbow she knew

He has something to say

Who said it was too late to apolagize?

Chorus 2x

Answer 1

love it but make it longer

Answer 2

Reverend Cyanide Twitch says another bad love song

Answer 3

to late to apologize? Somewhere over the rainbow?

His tears buried in the ground?

Sounds like 3 other songs put together to me.

Answer 4

It's good,

But it needs to be a little longer.

Answer 5

nice