What do you think of this song?????????????????????

Question

I want to perform this following song at assembly one day and was wondering what you music loving fans thought of it. I is called The One I Liked. It is about the guy I liked who hated me and then I started going out with this other person. Here it is.

Ohh, ooo

VERSE 1:

I loved you,

You hated me,

And now I’ve missed out,

To get know you better__________.

Now you’re gone,

And I have my memories,

But now I am with the one,

I hated ____________.

CHORUS:

I missed you,

I missed my chance,

But now I’m with,

The one I like.

You should have,

Said somethin’________,

And maybe__________,

We might have had somethin’.

The one I like oh yeah.

VERSE 2:

You missed out,

On your chance_______,

If you hadn’t,

Of hesitated,

I might be yours.

Now I’m with,

Your best friend,

And I’m lovin’ it_________.

CHORUS

BRIDGE:

You and me,

Could have been somethin’,

And now we both,

Have missed out on somethin’,

That could of changed our lives.

And now you realize,

That I always,

Was the one________ for_________ you______________________.

CHORUS 2x

Starts soft get louder

BRIDGE

The one I____________ liked_________________________.

Ohhhh, oooooo, yeah, woah.

The one_______ I_________ liked___________

Answer 1

well all the words sound good....but, i would have to hear the music n everything too.hope i helped.

Answer 2

not quite there     first i would recommend using an acoustic guitar or a piano for the song.

maybe its cuz i dont know the situation or i cant feel the tune but i think u need to change the order around the first verse.

i love the second verse, tellin it like it is and throwin it in his face i love it.

i think you should add a third verse describing that ur happier now and its better that ur with a better man. it should go after the chorus 2x and before the bridge.

u need to find some rhyme in the chorus because right now it doesnt really flow.

i do like the bridge but i think u should switch liked to loved so u can be more dramatic.

ending is perfect.   good luck

Answer 3

sad, :'(

Answer 4

I think that songs rhyme.

And this one doesn't.

Answer 5

lol