What do you think of this song?????????????

Question

The song is called I Just Wish. I want to know what all you music loving fans think of it.

I just wish

(Background sing Wishes while I sing line above)

Verse 1:

I wish for a star,

I wish for the whole wide world,

I wish for the universe,

But nothin’ can stop my wishes for you.

Chorus:

I wish for the first time,

I wish all the love in the world,

I wish for everythin’ to turn around,

I wish for your love.

I wish for your love for me,

To be greater than all the oceans on this world,

I wish you would just come and talk to me,

I just wish.

I just wish

(Background sing Ohh, ooo, I just wish while I sing line above)

Verse 2:

I wish that child labour would stop,

I wish we could all be friends,

I wish wars would stop,

I wish for nothin’ bad.

Chorus:

Bridge:

I just wish,

I just wish that you,

I just wish that you could come,

I just wish that you could come home with me,

I just wish,

I just wish,

I just wish,

I just wi__________sh,

Chorus 2x

Ohh, ooo, yeah, I ju____________st wish__________________

(Background sing I just wish while I sing last line)

____________ Means hold.

Answer 1

Lol it kinda sounds like you wanna be like John Lennon....

I dunnooo....i spose its good =)

Answer 2

Its good but you say I wish too much in the verses. Maybe change them to something more about love than wishes.

Well Done.xx

Answer 3

no

no

no