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Just as Sun basks EarthWith heat life-givingNewton’s fruit drawHer shine ever closer(By some natural law)Her warmth ever clusterTo my skinTo my strengthTo my heartFor she was LorenI need good critique here. I want to know if my rhythm is off.
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