PLEASE BE HARSH!
Characters
Una-Main character
Isobelle-Una's Mum
Charlie-Una's Step Dad
Phil-Isobelle's ex-boyfriend and psychopath
Patty-Una's Grandmother
Edward-Una's 'sorta' boyfriend
Patty has just passed away leaving Una an orphan and a key. they key unlocks a chest with a stack of money and a note inside. the note is a riddle that leads her to another then another and so on. she goes on an adventure to find her parents, Isobelle and Charlie have just recently disappeared in a tragic plane crash. on the way Phil is trying to murder Una for revenge. Una introduced Isobelle and charlie whoo fell instantly in love, leaving Phil single, devostated, angry and phsycopathic. Una meets Edward on the way who accomponies her on her journey.
in the end Edward and Una kill Phil (from self defense) , she doesn't find her parents, she travels all over the world, but she finds the family inheritance in the end.
What do you think? PLEASE add on anything that you think should be included and please rate MY story line. 10 being Perfect and 1 being c**p....Be honest!
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