What do you think of this tanka i wrote, honesty is the key.? i actually did this for an english assignment.?

Question

I walk alone now,

away from all the concrete

toward the water

underneathe the lonely moon

i walk alone to find you

Answer 1

I think that Tanka is really good. It has an awesome meaning. I love the last line " I walk alone to find you". Its just so centimental.

Answer 2

it is nice!!!

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write  if it's really you who write this:)