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What do you think of this verse I wrote yesterday?

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Men and women formin' division, passing pain to their children/ The child's a drug addict, cuz nobody had a vision/ He saw himself messed, and that's what he became/ But his life here on earth was only the 1st stage/ Cuz nobody shared with him the good news, he'll depart on judgement day/ People die everyday, people who coulda been saved/ here's some advice, get out of them gangs/ cuz when ur dead and buried, it won't matter what u all claimed/ We all die, that's a fact that can't be reversed/ if u think about it, we've been dying since birth/ Born into a world with sin as it's curse/ But thank the Lord, the devil is in defeat/ I live by the Word which says

he's under the soles of our feet/ That means the devil is weak, and nothing to me/ Cuz thru jesus christ, i claim the victory/ when jesus died, he made a show of them openly/ It doesn't matter what denomination u belong to, religion isn't what i'm speaking of/ I'm talking about life eternal, with a covenant thru Jesus' blood/

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  1. You are preaching the truth!


  2. It's good :)

  3. It'll probably sound OK with a rap track backed by a suitable rhythm.

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