What do you think of thiss?

Question

this is something i wrotee.

Nothing ever seems to go rightWith me and you,I’ll lay on my floorMy tears dropping to the groundYou’ll knock at my doorYou sometimes make me frown.You`ll talk to me for a whileThen just walk away.Erase my smile.My tears hit the ground.I’m nervous like a pitcher at his mound.I’ll cry at nightI don’t want to say anythingDon’t want to fightI want to be in your armsI want to be your girl.I want you in my world

Answer 1

'When you have something to give, people want to stay around. When you just want something from people, they tend to leave.

Answer 2

"Soul Mates and Twin Flames," Elizabeth Clare Prophet,

"Sacred Psychology of Love:  The Quest for Relationships that Unite Heart and Soul," Marilyn C. Barrick, Ph.D.,

"When God Writes Your Love Story," Eric and Leslie Ludy,

"Sexual Force or the Winged Dragon," O. M. Aivanhov, and

"For Women Only," Shaunti Feldhahn, are worthwhile.

Also, for poetry, "Nineteen Ways of Looking at Wang Wei," Weinberger and Paz.

Your poem is really good.

Answer 3

What is your question?

Answer 4

sweet

Answer 5

it's pretty good, nice imagery, but no deep meaning.