What do you think or have to say about my poem?

Question

Whispers,

Whispers float through the air

Like webs,

LIke silk.

Words that have been long forgotten

Sit still in the air.

Begging to be used agian,

Pleading with you...

The music to which they belonged

died long ago.

They desire,

They wish,

to be seen,

to be heard.

They're asking

for a voice?

For a reason...

a reason to be.

These words will

trap,

use you.

There greedy

mouths

will devore you,

The only way to

be saved from

their web.

Is to give the a reason

a voice to be heard.

Answer 1

the warm words in your poem are hungry to be uttered on the lips of the beloved, like a butterfly that waits for a bud to be opened and to turn into a beautiful rich scarlet  flower. . . beautiful i would say,, the idea is origional and new and the representation is as if "longing"  as the meaning . ..as "thirsty" as the goal .

Answer 2

I LIKE IT!!!!OMG , its really cool, kinda like my own writing and its really neat!!! it may benefit from a different format, and a few spelling errors, but thats np!!!

:) keep it up!!

Answer 3

very moving...

Answer 4

moving

Answer 5

beautiful moving breathtaking

Answer 6

Eh, I could do better.

Answer 7

Sixth line from the bottom i think you mean "devour" as in eat up. the poem is a sincere effort--keep at it!