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Question

Singing in the rain,

dancing with chaos.

I'm loving thunder,

playing a dangerous game.

I'm crawling along the edge,

daring to fall in

to the deep dark trench.

Sometimes I think dark,

is better than light.

I'm hoping for a special sight,

I want to be in control.

I want it to be only because I said so.

Flirting with the voices,

Hiding in the caves,

I'm only asking for,

trouble.

My dear falling in love,

its always scary,

no matter what...

but what did I,

fall in love with?

Answer 1

That's pretty good.

Answer 2

Ooh, not bad at all.  I'm liking this.  Keep it up.  

Answer 3

Interesting -- seems the speaker has fallen in love with  someone she is not sure about.

Nice use of action  verbs.  They really help to show the feel lings of the speaker.