What do you think? (poem i wrote)?

Question

I have written a poem. please tell me what you think. good or bad? what's your interpretation of the poem?

thanks! (it's below)

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Who is that in the picture?

Who is that staring back at you in the mirror?

How well do you truly know someone?

You do what you can to keep holding on

But one of these days you won’t recognize that person

And start to question how well you know that person

The picture that changes your whole view

To where you don’t recognize that person

Changes how you see that person when you talk to them

You may still be the same person on the inside

But I feel like I don’t know you anymore

And in a way that scares me

I still see you from my memories

But who are you now?

Who are you becoming?

Are you even happy anymore?

Answer 1

great poem ;)

Answer 2

I think thats a nice poem it seems like you are scared because you said in one of your lines there you might know him on the inside, but you feel like you dont know him anymore. maybe this is about your relationship experience in the past. but theres alot of nice men and woman out there.Im a writer as well IM writng my first book about my life good things and other stuff I write poems as well. smiles sunbeam

Answer 3

Well, I’d have to agree.  What make poems beautiful are synonyms for the words you used.  It’s to straight forward for me; a poem should make me wonder.  Keep trying till you find the perfect word to describe your feelings at that moment.  You definitely got some talent, practice makes perfect and permanent.  

Good luck

Answer 4

It doesn't seem to flow very well, and it doesn't use the imagry and funky words that I'm used to seeing in a poem. It's more like you're talking to someone, you know? It's not that it's bad, it's just unusual and I don't really like it that much, but that's just me.

Answer 5

Seriously I just like teared up for this poem, in a great way! It hit me like a brick wall, like oh my god, that poem just described me! I just can't recognize myself anymore, like i'm looking into a fogged up mirror! It's almost like you captured the readers attention immediatly, which is awesome!