What do you think? poetry?

Question

what do you think of this poem? honest but not to mean.

http://www.authspot.com/Poetry/I-Cannot.189437

Answer 1

its cute but i didnt really like the i am upset part at the end you should just leave it at i must be upset ;)

Answer 2

What are you trying to say?  You go through 9/10 through the poem but only the last three lines have anything to do with the experience you are trying to convey.  plus, the conclusion of the poem is contrary in logic to the rest of it.

Answer 3

its ok. but u need to should try writing something that isnt predictable. and try a poem with a beat.

Answer 4

its okay......

Answer 5

Pure art. Beautifully painted in words.

Answer 6

its pretty good

thumbs up!!!!!!!!!

Answer 7

hmm well it was quite good but the ending kinda destroyed it. fix the ending and it will be great.

good luck!