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What do you think....short story???

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I watched the ground move beneath me as i walked, not knowing, or caring, where i was going. I couldnt run but i could feel the heat of his breath on the back of my neck. I just dipped my head and walked with my hands shoved in my coat pockets, looking just like one of the other lone people who roamed the streets in this dreary weather. His voice rang in my head, which pounded with stress. I wasn't normal. I wasn't made to endure this.

My wings were tucked behind my coat which ripped when i extended them. White feathers fell around the sidewalk where i had been standing as i flew off.

I pulled a quick 360 making sure he was no where to be seen.

I sighed heavily and swooped toward the woods surrounding the mansion. He had to be there, if he was going back.

I turned quickly, narrowly avoiding his black wingtip.

"Dont kill me Aden." I shouted in rage, "Im the only way you can get back. You cant do it all alone."

His fiery eyes blazed. "I can do anything, even without you."

The sun iluminated his shadowed face showing the deep circles that formed under his eyes. He did need me. His magic was nothing unless i was with him.

"Without the sun..."he recited slowly.

I glided forward and reached out. "...The moon cant shine." He leaned into my open palm with his cheek.

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  1. i love it it's emotional keep up the good work


  2. DON'T QUIT YOUR DAY JOB.  ACTUALLY I THINK YOU'D BE VERY GOOD WITH POETRY.

  3. wow! thats amazing! did you write it? i totally luv it!

  4. alright, thats good!

  5. More like flash fiction than a short story, but very well written. you communicate an amazing amount of information, imagery and emotion with very few words, creating a riveting piece of short prose.

    Well done!

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