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What do you think think of this poem/prayer?

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i made it after my dog was stolen.We had her for three years.And i know it sounds like a three year old wrote it but what are your thoughts?

Dear Lord,

We miss Bo with all our heart,

Her being gone just rips me apart.

I never know if she`s scared or blue

That`s why I`m saying this prayer to you.

Please help her,guide her home

It breaks my heart to write this poem.

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  1. Missing Bo:

    You are more than a pet

    You are a dear friend

    the fun times and memories I will not forget

    and they will not end

    I have no idea what happened

    and I can't understand why

    you got stolen

    The tears coming down your eyes

    is the pain

    You kept me company

    in good times and bad

    You are considered one of the family

    this time is very sad.

    He was someone special

    the heartache I am going through

    is for someone thoughtful

    this is for you.


  2. sad...hope you find Bo soon.

  3. So sad .. 4 a moment I lost track here..thought It was (God forbid) a family member .. well put. hope U find Bo.

  4. AWW.. i'm sorry about your dog. It was very good. The rhyming helped a lot. Good Job!

    -A

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