What do you think this is about? Do you like it?

Question

She was looking deep inside herself

she was looking for the texture

the taste of her soul

She was trying to find a maze

a way to get lost in her mind

what she found was a padded cell

and the color white

He was her lover

the reason she wanted

to be lost in the beginning

the reason she wanted to stay that way

His voice is what told her the commands

His voice was that of the devil's advocate

She danced with him in the pale moonlight

She let him hold her tight

He created the grey with in her mind

plant the seed to change wrong to right

Oh she had fallen in love with the wrong sort of man

This man was no man at all

He went by many names

but this is the tale of Insanity

He courted her with a simple rose

a few fancy tales

and what else

only God knows

She is nothing but a vegetable now

simply in love with Insanity

simply in love with the idea of being

crazy

its probably the only thing

that keeps her going in the world

Answer 1

I do like your poem, and I understand about falling in love and going crazy because of it.  As your poem says "simply in love with Insanity", love is insanity and although I have lost everything because of love I wouldn't change it.  Being crazy in love I guess I will keep my promise and wait forever and that is all that keeps me going.

Keep writing as you have the talent to take the reader on a ride around your mind.

Best Wishes

Answer 2

Seems unique. But are saying she did this to herself, or was because of someone or something? The path she chose?

Answer 3

very good and this so happens to many foolish women.

Answer 4

this seems like the kind of thing to introduce a book i love it it makes me think a women who was sent to a place alone was made to take her last resort to her mind where she made a man from insaity and made believe her life i think this is great i just cant stop saying how much i love it right now.