What do you think this is about?

Question

This is pure gibberish and I'm not asking for feedback on if its good or not. I just want to know what you think the meaning of this would be if it were to have one:

You mutter how the grass has turned green

Everybody knows, but they don't know what you mean

They understood, words perfect and still

Thoughts are smashed, looking for thrills

You see them through your crooked eyes

Faces fogged, Lips filled with lies

Show them the truth

Point to the sky

Look to the ground then choke them with their ties

Sometimes they can't see what's in front of your nose

You're sure you've got a finger on it, but it's only your toe

There's not trace, Out of time, Out of place (praise?)

So wander down a familiar road

Search and count the steps til' it's shown

That though your books told you tales of Rome

You're in another land with no direction home

If you read this you're wonderful. Thanks.

Aha. I think I'm going to make this gibberish into a folk song.

Answer 1

That does sound like a folk song! I dont know what it might mean, maybe something about independence and free thinking. Liberation or something.

Answer 2

Its like about this guy in a unfamiliar place, the people are full of lies, when he tries to show them the truth, they don't understand.  It's confusing and I have no idea if I'm even close. :D

Answer 3

sounds to me like a crazy old man in a fantasy world that no one understands, and they see him and hear him but really don't get him..(thats what i get from it, mainly the first part)

but i was never good at analyzing poetry

Answer 4

um.  i think it's kinda nice.  really good actually.  my best today

Answer 5

Ok Im going to translate every line the way i see it

You mutter how the grass has turned green

~They say everything's ok

Everybody knows, but they don't know what you mean

~Everyone knows he/she is lying

They understood, words perfect and still

~Everyone understood what he/she meant

Thoughts are smashed, looking for thrills

~But they realized he/she lied

You see them through your crooked eyes

~You watch them hatefully

Faces fogged, Lips filled with lies

~You don't know them and cant trust them

Show them the truth

~Tell the truth (how u feel)

Point to the sky

~Show them the truth

Look to the ground then choke them with their ties

~do it humbly

Sometimes they can't see what's in front of your nose

~They can't see everything you do right

You're sure you've got a finger on it, but it's only your toe

~You think your right but ur wrong

There's not trace, Out of time, Out of place (praise?)

~You don't belong

So wander down a familiar road

~You've experienced that before

Search and count the steps til' it's shown

~Know whats gna happen

That though your books told you tales of Rome

~You know whats going to happen

You're in another land with no direction home

~Your lost (emotionally)

Deep!  Well everyone sees it differently

Answer 6

Even The Wrong Words Seem To Rhyme :]

Haha,

This Is Great.