What do you think- this is what I have to say about jumping (in a kind of poetic way)?

Question

Jumping is near and dear to my heart because it is not about your performance or the horse's performance, not about how you look or how the horse looks- it is about the two-hearted team that is you and your horse. And when jump, you jump together, and you fly together.

I know it's not ALWAYS true, but I was kind of proud of myself for coming up with it- I thought it sounded pretty good.

Please respond truthfully, but semi-nicely! Thank you! ♥

Answer 1

I really like it, but -honestly- sometimes jumping is about how you and or your horse look/ performance, especially in shows.

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good job though!

Answer 2

Couldn't have said it better myself ♥