What do you think to my poem? ?

Question

pls give me some good advice on how to make it better etc etc

I am lonely, like a tree

It's a sad irrationality

My tears fall to the ground

unnoticed but always found

to children, a play thing

found where the brids sing

as time goes by, i grow old

lonely in a field, tall and bold

slowly the gentle wind blows

and suddenly a seed flows

through the air, to the ground

it grows without a sound

gracefully the seasons pass

and so grows the grass

as well as the tree

now bold and tall, just like me

suddenly I now see

the beautiful thing beside me

from the same pattern my life's unglued

and love for me has been renewed

Answer 1

its amazing!!!

Answer 2

I like what you have to say, but it does lack poetic meter (rhythm).  For examples of meters, I recommend http://www.uncg.edu/~htkirbys/meters.htm .  I use is a lot, and it has some really good meter info and examples.

Answer 3

what is it supposed to mean/represent?

Answer 4

I like this quite well - a comparative image of life stages - very good ♥

Answer 5

this is very good. i have no critique for you because i thought it was very well written.  i liked it very much great job!

have a star =D

Answer 6

It is so beautiful. like nothing i've read b4. amazing work that you do