What do you think to this poem?

Question

THE WAY OF LOVE

Exciting,

Sweet,

Beautiful,

This is of course a girl,

That beautiful silky skin,

Those golden lips,

That soft feint voice,

That long gorgeous hair,

That amazing character,

How?

HOW!?

How do they do it?

Is it a spell?

Or is it a curse?

Knowing the one you love,

Is either in love with someone else,

Or is too old for you,

Love is a feeling that could make you,

Or it could break you,

Its has broken many people,

Including myself,

Is it a spell?

Can love be eternal?

People say you can find love deep inside your heart,

But if you look deep inside your heart wont you find the scars and bruises?

That love has left you,

I love her,

I’m crazy for her,

I would kill for her,

And she doesn’t even know it,

GO!

Go?

I would wish all the competition to GO away,

To stay with the one I adore,

And love,

She is the one for me,

And I can’t even get to know her as a very close friend,

Is age that important?

Or has love left me with half a heart?

Thanks for reading my poem feel free to comment (ps im only 13 years old)...I WILL BE DOING MORE!

Answer 1

WHOA your poems are amazing. AND your only 13?! Im 12 and write good poems but nothing like this

Answer 2

im a writer myself, i do short stories. & beleive me when i say u got it.

Answer 3

WOW!!!!

as for BUZbe how the h**l did they get to be a top contributor? By tearing everyone down? Seriously Buzbe, take your criticisms somewhere else! Just because YOU couldn't understand the opposite s*x at 13 doesn't mean everyone can't! keep up the good work kid! And don't let the Buzbe's of the world get you down!

Answer 4

A 13 year old would never have these deep feelings for the opposite s*x... I think you are fraudulent in this aspect!! You are Casanova's son and Shakespeare's nephew or the greatest liar on this post! Someone so young would never put women on the highest pedestal... Silky skin, Golden lips... PLEASE! Could you be an exception wise beyond your 13 years? You cannot know of the virtue of girls much less women of perfection. AND TO LOVE SUCH A CREATURE THE WAY YOU SPEAK... As if you were amorous with Cleopatra and Helen Of Troy? You blaspheme mightily my young one... I do not believe one minute you have put away childish games and now play the roulette wheel of love...

Answer 5

wow, you're very good i like it

Answer 6

One word: Amazing.   :)

Answer 7

This is a nice poem, I am very impressed, Its amazing, I got really into it, you were very descriptive, please continue writing more poems. I give it a 5/5, for a 13 year old to write something like that....WOW....that seriously takes talents

Its very creative and shows how powerful your artistic ability is.

P.S. I am only 14 myself

Answer 8

Awesome dude! Thanks for critiquing mine!

Your one is deep also and speaks truth!