What do yout think if this picture how can i improve it??

Question

http://i325.photobucket.com/albums/k364/ambientpics/DSCN0264.jpg

http://i325.photobucket.com/albums/k364/ambientpics/DSCN0256.jpg

Answer 1

exposure mostly. one hand is so washd out there is no detail at all

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Answer 2

They are both good.

But the 1st one needs editing- the right hand has color and the left one has too much light to it.

But very good.

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Answer 3

i think they're great. i notice you faded the color away from fruit in her hands with a feathering effect.. the hands still have some color.take that color away  from the hands. if you want more color around you might want to try to fade the color of the fruit around her hands as if its a reflection of the fruit.keep her skin color away pretty much.