What do yout think of my poem?

Question

on my way to comet suicide

dont bothers trying

to talk me out of it

it was ment to

happen sometime

soon. everything

happens for a reason

and everyone was

born for a purpose.

and my life was ment

to be short lived. please

do not blame yourself for

what will happen, this was

my choice- my desicion

to make. so plese dont

cry when you here the

news, or here the rumors

you know are true. just

know i felt no pain as i

lay myself to rest, it was

quick and painless so dont

be sad, it was my destiny-

that i needed to fullfill.

Answer 1

this is sad.

Answer 2

I like it, but change the last part, that says 'it was quick and painless'

Answer 3

Wow, I hope you aren't serious, your life can be worth something if you accept Jesus into your heart and live for him.

Answer 4

people who are going to commit suicide dont tell people...they just do it!

Answer 5

yyea i like it

Answer 6

Looks like you are reaching out for help in the wrong places.

Answer 7

i really like it i cannot write poems like that i want you to tell yourself good job because that was awesome and writing poems is really good to get out your angers

Answer 8

get a life

Answer 9

Interesting poem to say the least,

I would not want to become decease.

at least not before the time has come,

I like to have a full life before I am done.

The word you use comet is in the sky,

the word commit is what we always try.

Even though the poem is a little dark,

I prefer love to be in my heart.

Life is to short as it is,

it is your right to choice to live.

So keep writing those poems,

and keep your thoughts grown.

When you become a famous poet,

I will look forward to getting to know it.

Good luck.

Answer 10

i like it

Answer 11

I like it. If I were to write a poem it would not make sense at all. Keep up the good work!!