What does everyone think of my poem?

Question

I wrote this poem a few nights ago and I just wanted to see what everyone thought about it. And maybe if you had an Idea for a title of it.

Every girl wants glass slippers like Cinderella

Every girl wants roses

Every girl wants sweet nothings whispered in her ears

Every girl wants true love that lasts forever

But...

The truth is...

Glass always breaks

No rose lives forever

Sweet Nothings are always lies

And true love always dies

Answer 1

God I love it. Dark, but not so dark as to lead me to believe your the person who's actually going through what you wrote about.  

Answer 2

i totally see the message. that's really good! i like it a lot.

Answer 3

i like that fight in you..A-

Answer 4

omg that was a really good poem. i actually love it sooo much its now one of my fav poems, i have never heard a poem with such a sad and unexpected twist.. and its so true.. you explained it all. good job

and your right, the reason its so understood is because everyone knows what you feel, and thats why every girl dies a little inside everytime they hear somthing like that. I respect it

Answer 5

I love it.......i actually really got into it as soon as i read the first line!

Answer 6

May a title to this poem could be "A Fairytale Dream" Hmm..may I also say you have put your work out there..you are open to criticism..

There are some people in Who Will Like your Word...Some that don't.

Keep writing as it is a way that of expressing ourselves..Cheers

Answer 7

I like it:]

you should call it something like "Truth"

Answer 8

Yes it sounds very smart and realistic it seems short but has lots of strong meanings to you detailed it with a nice set of words you make it sound very sad but thoughtful in a way I love how you a first made it sound very happy and like being in the best place in the world then it all washes away and becomes nothing but sadness. I love your poem :D

Answer 9

It's a little more dramatic than what I believe is true, but drastic measures are needed to dispel those myths. Well done!

Not to mention, well written.