What exactly should i say to the manager about the job application?

Question

i sent in an online application to burger king about two weeks ago and im not quite exactly sure on how to ask about my application! heres what i've come up with:

hello, my name is ____ ______. i submitted an application for employment about 2 weeks ago, and i was just checking in to see if u were hiring and id just like to know if you'll be reviewing applications anytime soon if you havent already.

is that okay? is there any thing i should not say,or somethin i should add to better my chances in getting an interview?? help will be very much appreciated. :)

Answer 1

You should be a little more assertive. Ask the manager WHEN not IF. And just be confident and professional and you should be fine!

I'd say something more like "Hello I'm suchandsuch. I submitted an application for employment with your company about 2 weeks ago and I'm calling to see when we could set up an interview."

Good luck!

Answer 2

Rainbow Amnndro said it pretty good..

Thats what I would do.

Keep calling them.

Answer 3

I would suggest going in and talk to the manager in charge and ask if they are doing any hiring.If they are,Give them your interest and your availability. Usually with fast food,They hire people on the spot.

With the economy today,it is difficult to find employment. Just keep your head high and apply everywhere else. You can not focus on one particular employer or you will not get anywhere.

Good luck!!