What grade would you give me?

Question

i know i jsut posted this but i fixed all the grammar errors and re uploaded it

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8UNoxxWseIA

its graded on creativity

organization

and factual information.

be honest please!!

Answer 1

Melanie, you did a very good job on your presentation. I am glad that your class is doing this kind of stuff because there are a LOT of folks that are in total denial over the fact that this kind of stuff ever happened and the whole world can never forget the inhumane treatment that was meted out to those who were different in that time and place.

To be fair, I looked at several of the other presentations to have something to compare yours with. As far as I am concerned, EVERYONE deserves an "A" because everyone presented what the objectives of the assignment were intended to be, and did so in a beautiful fashion. That's just MY opinion. But if you did your very best at it, and I think you did, then you deserve an "A" for the work, but more importantly, your TEACHER deserves a HUGE pay raise and a huge hug for keeping the awareness of this tragic time alive in the hearts and minds of his/her students.

I do think however, that you should have given credits to the sources of your photos and poem as a part of the end credits of your piece, otherwise it's plagiarism and copyright infringement.

Brightest Blessings,

Raji the Green Witch

Answer 2

Idk maybe A- or a B+

Answer 3

I'm not just saying this to make you happy, but I actually thought it was amazing. That was so heartwrenching, you picked out great facts and pictures that really showed the horror of the Holocaust. It was disturbing, but it was supposed to be. I would give you an A, the only problem is that some of the pictures were very low quality but that barely even matters. The song fit the message perfectly. You did a great job.

PS I love that poem of the end. My AP US History teacher had it posted in her classroom.

Answer 4

that was amazing the poem at the end to was good i would give you  an A++++++++++ you really deserve it

Answer 5

I thought your video was excellent. It is informative, detailed and deep. As the person before me has suggested, citing your sources is useful and it makes your work all the more credible. I love how it ends on a solemn note with the poem at the end. Well thought out. A.