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What happens next? You guessed it, a poem.?

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A man asks a woman to be his wife

Mix emotions and live this life

Wanting so much her by his side

Sure of himself with his new bride

They share with each other talking for hours

Thinks of her when gone thinks to send flowers

Craves the whole package loves her style

His hardest heart melts at her smile

Hard to explain he can’t understand

He feels that is part of being a man

She keeps him off balance somewhat unsure

She knows what he likes makes him want more

They give of each other 2 equals a team

They talk of tomorrow an image a dream

Entwined in their love their hearts aglow

The world is theirs or so they think so

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  1. I think this is a beautiful poem!  From courtship through marriage and to learning to live together.  Quite a lot in a compact poem.

    Well done.

    T.


  2. So They Think So?

    Not Sure Of The Meaning of This Ending!

    If All Else Is At It Seems In Your Reading, Their Should Be No Question In Your Ending!

  3. wow, again, how do you write so well? great job, keep it up!

  4. Again wow! I thinkl this is a great poem for a painting by Marc Chagal- Lovers in Lilacs.

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