What happens to your system when you first wake up?

Question

A false start....(a Jayku snapshot)

by Jellz Fisher 080902

Murmur tranquil peace

Harmony dreams echo long

Dawn’s golden waking

Elevate mid-calm

Pillow chaos arises

Chilled air greets body

Reality bites

Cold floors, rush nerves, rouse senses

Life intensifies

Clock beats heart rhythm

Out of bed into bedlam

Days begin too fast

There’s gotta be another way!!

Answer 1

Yeah, what Elaine said!!!

"Pillow chaos, reality bites, into bedlam" all GREAT phrases,

wish I had thunk of 'em!

ma

Answer 2

Very accurate description of early morning, professionally formatted and metaphorically stated.

Answer 3

Day begins too fast

yes, it's entirely true

no get up and out!

No sympathy here, you ku penner!  lol  

Answer 4

I love it!  Getting up in the cold of winter is bad enough,

but out of bed into bedlam is priceless!

Answer 5

is that what happens?

because the next thing i know

im just standing there with a half cup..

i think i can remember a little Pillow Chaos tho. LOL