What is a good site that will help me with my writting, gramar, sentence sturcture, ect?

Question

http://protagonize.com/story/hmhas-wolf

i know there is stuff wrong with that but i have no idea where to start or what to do, or even what is wrong.

Answer 1

Here's a good site for review. You might also consider a tutor. I saw so many things wrong -- both subtle, and serious -- that you really need some intensive help.