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What is it about a military ceremony we find so thrilling?

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Ushered to the crisp linen-backed folding chairs

reserved just for family in the front row

the emptied hangar now filled not with planes

but men in uniform all standing at attention

to my front, flags tall in a line behind them

a Navy band playing off to the side patiently waiting

the traditional pomp and circumstance to commence

this military ceremony honoring their station's

beloved commanding officer, my father

we sat so straight as we were trained to do aware

the warm eyes burning the backs of our necks

"You represent me, you will be watched by the crowd

remember that and behave accordingly," he warned

the Captain smartly strides his way to the stage

shoulders squared, head erect, his cover starched and placed

with visor exactly parallel, two inches above his eyebrows

in full dress whites as per the uniform of the day

he begins his speech full of praise for his troops

politically correct in noting not his own importance

a chest weighted down with multiple rows of colorful

medals betrays his futile attempt of humility

a sharp salute is delivered in respect as yet another

award is presented to this highly admired, successful man

this man who just the night before came to my door again

ordered me to his bed and did things to his nine year old

daughter for which I'm quite sure no medals are received.

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  1. I am sorry for what happened to that nine year old girl. No medals should be awarded...you are right. Nine year olds need to know where their voice can be heard and taken serious. So sad how many young gals had this happen and kept quiet out of fear, love..whatever.  


  2. That is quite a kicker you have injected in the last stanza, up to that point I was feeling a bit ambient about the poem.  THEN you lit it up and made a ho-hum piece of verse have an impact right between my eyes.

    Well done.

  3. Very good Ma. Would like to say i attended one of those funerals for my Uncle Homer who served in WW 2. Most impressive, the pomp and circumstance was something that made me cry. Thanks, and for those who dont know they should.I wouldnt call it thrilling but a reminder of who just died to help US be free.

  4. Let his sadness be

    his own. You've had your

    turn at the gallows hang, now

    breach the pain and kill

    the girl.

  5. It's about honoring those who serve and have served our country. All who serve are not like the man in your poem....thank God. **gives you hugs**.

  6. wow..nice expression ma.

    love you

  7. There is no real thrill in them in my opinion and thankfully there are more good people verses the bad in our military. No man or woman that harms a child, military or non-military, deserves honor or respect. They deserve to be punished.

  8. Life has little cruel ironies and I hope the little girl learns bravety latter life.

  9. Very nicely done I'd say. LOL

  10. He pays for eternity

    A disgrace not only

    To his country

    But to his family

    To his Creator

    His medals burn hot

    In h**l

    She becomes an Angel

    Helping so many

    Watching over us Always

  11. Military ceremonies, pomp and circumstance

    they are indeed majestic to behold.

    The pageantry to represent the glory

    of those on whom the medals are bestowed.

    The uniforms a symbol of their honor

    like the knights of old, sworn to uphold the truth.

    And last the ball, with merriment and dances

    in honor of the one who stole your youth.

    A true tragedy, ma.

  12. That was good, a man in uniform always looks hot to me

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