What is it good for?

Question

I have worked hard at this and have allowed it to be published in my friends university project.

Please tell me what you guys think

Lies and betrayel shown daily on the News,

If you carry on like that, you're gonna lose,

You're the kinda guys we would happily kill

For all the innocent blood you enjoy to spill

The end is nigh, which we can see,

It will be the end of you and we will be free,

But there is one fact, we know to be true,

There are gonna be more a******s just like you,

Constantly starting wars on foreign soil,

You say its against terror, but we know its for oil,

You send out our troops because it's 'best for the nation'

Who the **** do you think you are? with your ideas above the station

This one is for you, our gracious leaders,

We're all fed up with the bullshit that you feed us,

One day you will be caught vulnerable, we will get inside your shell,

And when it happens, You'll be ******, Coz we're sending you to h**l.

Copyright Sean Webb 2006

Answer 1

OPINION : COPYRIGHT ^_^

    Bad* Words should be an emphasis to the strong emotions that you let out. I feel your restricting yourself about these words, never fail to understand that these words are the words that show how strong your emotions about the topic, your poem is good* taken into cosideration that it is self-aware and it does show a sense of responsibility reflected from the writer, I'm not saying that you should put a lot of bad words as possible, sometimes if u make an interesting and a powerful line ! Write it men !! its shouting... its your right to write these kind of things. WELL I CREATED A POEM THAT CONSISTS ALL BAD WORDS, THEY LOVED IT BECAUSE I POINTED THE HOLES IN OUR SOCIETY ADDED WITH THE FREEDOM OF SPEECH. well if you still need my opinions... I will gladly read them... send it to [e-mail], all the poems are surely copyrighted and to be deleted immediately after reading it.

COPPYWRIGHT (c) Arnold B.

Answer 2

Too late. My middle name is Edwin...

"Say it again..."

I have a book for you to read, "War and the Poet" by Eberhart/Rodman.

Answer 3

I think it is superb.

Keep up the EXCEPTIONAL work!