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What is it you think of my poem?

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Darkness,

overwhelms the light.

demons they come at night,

like a shadow.

strangled cries,

endless pain,

until the dawn,

a ray of hope,

like a dagger of light,

the sun from its hilt.

Darkness gone,

bright thoughts awoken,

until the night is brought unspoken.

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  1. It's beautiful, you're very talented


  2. omg

    ur a natural

    way 2g dude!!

    i luv it dont wry about it

    i wouldnt change 1 bit

    its perfect the way it is

    dont listen 2 others

  3. That is one dark poem ... BUT I LOVE IT =P

  4. thats very good

    ur gifted

  5. I love it! your great you should write a book!

  6. it's very nice!!!

  7. Nice job, short (my favorite kind of poetry) an easy read and very descriptive!! Cheers!!

  8. o wow that really good!

  9. thats very good cant wait to hear more

  10. nice job... but maybe a lil too emo-ish

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