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What is the cause of the Tygers and Babooms in the shrubbery?

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Emmie P.

The wind circles round, laughing

As she dances with it

Trailing sparkles and spangles

And giggles in the air

The trees look down and listen

The flowers wave and smile

Marvelling at the sunlight

Playing catch-me through her hair.

A strange spell fills the garden

Time has no meaning here

Things once so familiar

Are no longer the same

And just for a minute

The world's a brighter place

Sprinkled with the magic

From a six year-old's game.

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  1. A very magic garden as only a six year old imagination can make it.

    I really appreciate this gem of a poem!


  2. You've captured the vivid imaginations of a child.  Well done.

  3. The ending was unexpected and made the poem. Before, it was a lovely description with metaphors giving the wind and other aspects of nature life. But the last line really gets into the mind of a child and adds a new dimension to the poem. I like this very much.

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