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What is the grammer mistake in this paragraph?

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which is more easier,piano or violin?

I only have 2 years to learn one instrument and I need to be at least Level 5.So I need to play a instrument which I can have the best results.I have the basic skills for both piano and violin.

But as you guys all know,there's a whole lot more people playing piano than violin,so if I play violin I'll be kinda "special"....So which should I choose??

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  1. though there are several other mistakes the grammatical error would be " more easire"  there is no need to put more in front of easier because the suffix "ier" has been placed at the end of the word, there is a pattern, easy, easier, easiest, on words not capable of such suffixes ,like difficult, must have more or most placed in front, there is no such word as "dificultier" or "dificultiest", so it is said  " more difficult" or " the most difficult" .


  2. There are several mistakes:

    "Which" should be capitalized

    "easier" rather than "more easier"

    "2" should be "two" with period after instrument.

    Delete the and before "I need to be"

    Add "a" or "at" before Level 5

    The next phrase is an incomplete sentence. put a comma before "So" and use a lower case "s"

    "an" instead of "a" instrument

    "with which" instead of "which"

    delete "the" in front of basic skills

    insert a semicolon after "violin" and use lower case "b" on "But" to combine the 2 phrases

    put a comma after "but"

    delete "as you guys all know"  (non-standard speech)

    replace "there's a whole lot more people playing" with "many more people play"

    Add a period after violin

    Delete "so" and capitalize "if"

    comma after "violin"

    Delete "I'll be kinda special" and replace with "I'll be more..." (word of your choice - unique, competitive, in demand????).

    Delete "So"

    Capitalize "Which"

  3. a) what "are" the "gramm(a)r" mistake(s) in this paragraph?



    b) I only have 2 years to learn one (of the) instrument(s) and I need to be at least Level 5.

    c) So I need to play a(n) instrument which I can have the best results.

    d) But as (all of) you guys know,there's a whole lot more people (are) playing piano than violin,so if I play violin(,) I'll be "special"....So which should I choose??

    Other than about your grammar mistakes, i think you should choose the one that you like most! Dont care about the speciality but care more about what do you like most! And for me, i like to play violin. Because playing violin is more cooler than piano! Especially when the way we play with it!

    P.s. i'm a daycare teacher! i'm taking care of children and also teaching them!

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