Okay, I'm in this little writing competition that has you explore numerous different writing forms, and today's challenge was to write a haiku. Now, I'm new at writing haikus, but I think I did well enough. Anyway, I just need to know if it's obvious enough what this haiku is about. So, what do you think this is? (Also, I'd appreciate it if you didn't give me tips on how to improve the poem since it's for a competition, and I want to do it on my own two feet if you get what I mean. And if you tell me I'll feel compelled to apply it, and etc, etc) Thanks for the help.
The iceberg crushes
Was called the unsinkable
Fathoms deep it sleeps.
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