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What is wrong with this sentence?

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"There are many ways in which to tell a story and it is the author's job to convey the text in a meaningful way."

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  1. Nothing wrong.


  2. You don't 'convey' a text, you 'convey' a meaning.

    "There are many ways in which to tell a story and it is the author's job to convey the story [or 'it'] in a meaningful way."

    Or:

    "There are many ways in which to tell a story and it is the author's job to write his text in a meaningful way."

  3. it looks very good to me

  4. "There are many ways to tell a story; it is the author's job to convey the text  meaningfully."  

  5. punctuation mark...you'll gonna kill me if you didn't use a comma because I need to read it continuously.  

  6. after 'story' swap the 'and' for a comma :)

  7. Stories can be told in many ways. It is the authors job to convey the text in a meaningful way.

    That's how I would do it if it helps =]

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  8. It is a run on sentence. You can break it into 2 sentences. You also don't need the words, "in which."

    There are many ways to tell a story.

    It is the author's job to convey the text in a meaningful way.

  9. i think you should put a comma between STORY and AND. "There are many ways in which to tell a story, and it is the author's job to convey the text in a meaningful way."  

  10. Id maybe use a comma after story.    

    "There are many ways in which to tell a story, and it is the author's job to convey the text in a meaningful way."  

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