What is your interpretation of this poem I wrote/what are your thoughts on it?

Question

I haven't done this before, but I would like to have some opinions.

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walking down a road of

smoke and needles

with only a pair of socks

and lips to cover your own mouth

you're not sure the difference between too much and enough

so it can't hurt, a little more

It's the illusion

the hollowed out field of flowers and life

but you are just

too far gone

when there is finally no difference

between what's killing you

and what's keeping you alive

once you've been spared

understand you haven't been forgiven

understand, and maybe

you can find it in your own heart

to let yourself

start over

Answer 1

what is this poem really about.

Answer 2

I read it twice and have no clue what you are trying to say.

Answer 3

All I can say right now is WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWW! I love writing too but that like tops everything I've ever done and squashes it. Hm.. To me its talking about loss... maybe of a family member or someone you loved... but everyone interprets poetry differently.

But I have to say, keep on going! Because you are an absolutely AMAZING writer and you could have a lot of success in that. You have a lot of natural talent. Use it wisely.

Good luck.