What is your opinion of this poem?

Question

Beyond all thought

Reason, there is not such a word

This sickness I’ve caught

Flew right to me, into I, a ghost no bird

Simplicity reigns on my head

Dancing little fairies

Their eyes glowing red

I smile, if a bit not there

For this new idea, oh so new it is, dripping

Has fell from twilight into my hands

The weight of ideas drug me slipping

Beyond return, I enter the dark light on sands

So wrong, yet grayness showed more than the sun I fell gripping

My mind, oh how this light, my thoughts before tear

Nausea dots my vision

Head on backwards, eyes wide open

My insides writhe, why did I chose this decision

Panic gripped my throat

I felt a cry rise to the empty sky

Those fairies, how they gloat

They knew all along, how it would tie

Destiny is not real

Fate is not destined

Nothing will forever seal

Calmness is too far a cry

I soon pick up the dance begun with a thought

Side ways, up, around I slip

Slipping gently on darkened sand, myself I caught

Turn, take a bow, Bend at your waist and over you tip

My empty audience, no not at all sought

For I am here, I fall, I sigh

Looking up from the place I lay

I soon realize I am staring downward

Never really falling but rising, I could not tell

Beyond all thought

Reason, there is not such a word

This cure I’ve caught

Flew right to me, into I, a ghost no bird

Answer 1

aboslutley amazing.

literally.

like other ones,

you gave me goosebumps.

i dont think there is a POINT to this poem.

but i think theres mixed thoughts.

thats the message im getting

you're VERY talented.

10/10

oh, i love how you write poems for you, and you dont care what people really think,

it's a great way to write about anything, and everything.

(hope i helped )

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Answer 2

You say you write it for yourself yet you have opened yourself up by asking for opinion. You must be able to deal with what you have put out there. Not everyone will like it and you shouldnt have to explain it-I myself like the words you use. They are very visual. I would break up some of the longer sentences just IMO

Answer 3

there is no point or i couldnt get to it but you used great word choice

Answer 4

You've got potential. But in my opinion, it didn't really make sense to me. It was good, but I just didn't get its point.

Answer 5

I liked it a lot. Very deep with insight