What is your opinion on my poem?

Question

For only certain eyes

for only certain eyes see within

for most only see my curves

not very many see the love within

most see the unwanted curves

the unwanted bigger build

for only certain eyes see the pain within

for not haveing that pefect size

I wake in the morning and I walk outside

feeling I look fine

then I remember the unwanted curves of mine

and the unknown pain I hold within

for the wanting to be that perfect body

for even just one day

to have those others look my way

to want me as they do for those perfect bodies

for only certain eyes see I have more to show then just a body

I have love to give

I have a careing heart

I have joy that most of them don't seem to have

I have happniess for being alive

I have strengths that are not my body

for only certain eyes see I have dreams too

I have emotions too

and when they don't want my curves

I shed a tear every night

for the unwanted curves I have

and the unknown love that lives within

for only certain eyes

Answer 1

that is amazing to deep and really makes a poem. it  sounds like it exspres your feelings it sounds like it's about someones body that people find ugly and no one can exsept you for who you are because they just want looks and other stuff and only some people can see people for more than that for all there glory for life and love and more not just because they have the perfact shap that is an amazing poem i love it

Answer 2

Honest and sincere! Very nice!

Answer 3

you made a good poem. your choice of words are ok. you have rhythms in your poem. it is a good poem!