First point of view
I could barely stay still because of my excitement.
When I entered the gates of the amusement park I saw a whole new world.
The smell of cotton candy drifted up my nose.
I could hear terrified screams in the distance.
As I took my seat in roller coaster my heart was beating out of my chest.
The roller coaster was as fast as lightning, blowing my hair all over.
I heard someone screaming and it took a while to realize that it was me.
Third point of view omniscient
Jenna entered the amusement park feeling dizzy and terrified.
“Come on Jen, it's not that bad,†said her older brother Jack
who was also a bit scared. “I'm not scared,†Jenna said, lying through her teeth.
Jenna and Jack went towards the biggest ride in the park shaking.
They both could no longer back down and sat down in their seats.
“Never mind , I don't care if you call me a baby I not going to kill myself,â€Â
Jenna said in a panicked voice.
But, it was to late the ride had begun.
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