Question:

What precisely creates?

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"Distrust"

I called you

friend,

upon

a time.

Your words

betrayed

our fragile

pact.

I don't

deserve

the trust

I gave,

but I thought

I

would be

the one

who broke beneath

the demon

love.

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  1. betrayal .... the worst form of  sin is the lie. If you let it it will change you forever. parents do it to children all the time.


  2. I just love your new do...

  3. This is a tragically jaded perspective of love, "the demon love".  It is, however,a beautifully written, powerful statement about the impact of distrust on friendship, on loving.  There is such melancholy in the words here, and such depth of perception.  I do not know precisely what creates distrust, but it is destructive once it takes hold.  Thank you.

  4. This is what I feel at times... as my own voice. One of my greatest fears is... that it will be another speaking of me.

  5. unshared purposely neglected anything, pretty much.

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