What say to "A Swingin' Morning" Pome?

Question

Well-a bless my soul, what is wrong with me...

Always questioning, never satisfied...

Better wake up, little Susie! Wake up...

With overwhelming curiosity...

Creativity living inside you...

It's back! To bother you! Will you survive...

With those old words upon the page? Revise...

Argentina. Because I wait for words...

All along the Watchtower images...

Not all the leaves are brown, not all skies gray...

Both been sound asleep! Wake up! Get out of bed...

With or without you, achy, breaky heart...

'Houston, we have a problem...Major Tom

Is writing in a most peculiar way....'

'Creative, that's why he was sent into space...

Hush, hush, thought we heard the words of a poem...

Now, hush, hush....'

(Apologies to: Elvis, The Everly Brothers, Gloria Gainer, Jimi Hendrix, U-2, Billy Ray Cyrus, The Mamas and Pappas, The Beatles, Deep Purple...)

Answer 1

Two fish(es), in a glass, having a conversation :

Mono-colored : I 'm creative, I can change my color to all different shades and grades !!

Multicolored: But I can promote all colors, and all shades of each; plus mixing them up to form new color. So I' m more creative than you.

Mono-colored: What are we waiting for, siss ? let us go to the high-seas of creativity, and show what we have got !

multicolored: Having all those sharks around me! Noway, Hemingway. Haven't you heard of  'The Old Man and the Sea' ?"

Mono-colored ( in a sincere tone) :Sister, you are a lot wiser than me,  I do (apologize) for any promise I made and haven't delivered yet.

Elys, its true, the watch tower images, looking at it, seeing it, living it , are parts of creative imagery, but how to put them in unprecedented form or style, is creativity; that lives inside you.It takes courage, though. As usual, you are superb with words and images. Never mind the above silly dialogue. Have a good day.

Answer 2

Where's Snidely ????

Put on yer Dancin shoes...!!!

What have you got to lose.....

Deep Purple shorts and a yellow tambourine

Four fingers and a thumb

and a stolen hotel towel...

Sing..sing..sing..sing !!!!

Two taps for two shoes..

Bridge over Troubled Water...

Another Hurricane A Commin...

Batten down the hatches..

Hang on to your Rooster...

Floppin and Squawkin in the wind....

Good Mornin !!!

Answer 3

I'm no longer a poet. I've decided to become an astronaut instead. None of that NASA training c**p, though. I am going as an Independent. I've been hording hydrogen peroxide for years. I have enough now, but I still need more alcohol.

Answer 4

Errr Errrrrrr Errrr Errrrrrr !!!!!!  USA

Wearin my "I Bin Bopped In Beijing" T Shirt...

was arrested for indecent exposure at the Candy Club!!!!

here in Australia....

Woke up early and crowed before anyone there even thought about it.

Went to the market in Melbourne...lost my way home  ended up at

The Stockman....ended up with Rosie....wild women here..he he... they know what they want..they say any koklldooooo!!!

At least they have sit down toilets here.......

Woooo Hoooo is the Beer strong here....

Duster, muster, fluster rusty rooster loves his brewster...

Insane almost nude beaches

Veryeducationaltosaytheleast

Good Morning!!!!

I Da Rooster !!!!

YAAAAAAA!!!!!

String Beans and Mozerilla....Mmmmmm

Answer 5

Cue the bongos... light the joints... ... ... not poetry... not art.

Answer 6

Your so creative!  So glad your a new contact!  I'm tired of critiquing poetry that is no where near your caliber!

Answer 7

Is it considered a talent to sing in the voice of Janice Joplin?

It works well with this tune.

Good morning!

Answer 8

What?????

Chatty....!!!!!

Put em in the deep fryer and do it again.

Marble mouthed in the morning.....

Ya ya ya...!!!!

SCREAM...!!!

Panic and pandemonium.....

Run...HIDE....

Sneer...

Snidely is here...

Somewhere..!!!!

Meanwhile....

Fat Chattin along.....

GOOD MORNING !!!!!

Answer 9

I'm not crazy about the first line, but the rest is good. It doesn't have a regular meter, but the lines are consistently metrical. Good job!

Answer 10

Good Morning !!!,,,No apologies that I could see are needed ,,,,,,A good Rockin' & a Rollin' Mawn'n ta ya!!!

Answer 11

Mornin to you in the afternoon...bad dude headin your way, sister

this Gustav is no Holst either, and he isn't writing about Mars.  You and the Rooster keep it safe, hear?

Answer 12

Thanks for the email. I didn't know you cared. Good night.

Answer 13

That along with my coffee has me set for the day.

Good Morning