What say to "Everest...Growing Upwards" poem?

Question

The mountain...it's soul...

Sentient or stone

Nudges upwards.

Centimeters over

Millenia...

The mountain...it's faces...

Will it grow into the Light,

Pawning souls on it's slopes

For entrance...

The mountain...it's being...

Has it dissolved all want,

Need, to defy Earthly concerns

In penance...

The mountain...it's heart...

Will fall into itself. Too much

Weight upon the Earth...

The soul, overburdened in sin.

Answer 1

You have a natural gift!  

Answer 2

Just lovely. Everest has claimed many souls. I love anything to do with Mountains. Thank you.

Answer 3

Such force to shift historical plates.....Pushing always...upward hope

Answer 4

The mountain - evergrowing - its final collapse - overweight.  Loved the "pawning" of souls - very apt description - of the lives lost - in trying to conquer this giant.  Well done ♥

Answer 5

Yeah, I got the picture. What a metaphor ! Good evening !

Answer 6

So many ways to look at it. Wonderful.