What say to "Sewing Day And Night" poem?

Question

Clouds through the eye of a needle,

Cross-stitching fluffy-puff blue

In Day's frame...no stingy winds...

All directions charitably magnanimously

Embroidering shadows on the Sun.

Running hems on Light's skirts.

Later. Later, Night's seams will tight-fit

Her Earth bodice, and the Mother will

Snip threads of the Daylight, carefully

Re-threading with Dawn...waiting to

Tat-lace Night.

Answer 1

Been sewing in the back yard forever it seams and the only thing I been coming up with is tomatoes this season!  Or might that be I was sowing the yard it seems oh that spell check not doing it's job again!

This a good one, lol , love the metaphor!

Cheers!!

Answer 2

Oh darn, there's a run in my horizon...

Answer 3

I'm getting weird vibes from this...

It sounds like you're very crafty and religious.

It's very good.

Answer 4

I say it is nice and reminds me of my grandmother, always sewing, embroidering, and watching the weather from her window.

Answer 5

Wow!  I got the image of a wonderfully fluffy quilt of Day, and a grand evening gown of Night with lace edging.  Beautifully written!

Answer 6

the celestial seamstress is a singer!  interesting metaphors, I have to admit I have never thought of the passage of the day in sewing terms.  Thanks!

Answer 7

Sadly you're blessed with a programmable Singer and all I have is this needle and thread.

Answer 8

I 'd say YES. This is a new class of flowers I 'd like to see posted at Y/A under poetry. After all, its naturally beautiful. Love your words!

Answer 9

A Universal sewing lesson. What a unique way of looking at the Universe!

Answer 10

They never taught me anything like that in Home Ec.

Answer 11

A great visual of mother nature's needlecraft - good job. Even the Mother's wardrobe was mentioned with the words "hems" and "seams" - never heard it expressed like this before - brilliant! ♥

Answer 12

Beautiful!

YA is improving!

Answer 13

I love the way that you take simple themes and add such color, leaving the reader with pleasant thoughts.