What say to "The Birds Of Divorce" Poem?

Question

Grackles tip step rails.

Garrulously return...

Raucous return...

Insufficient birdings.

Trinity. Rush green free...

Rush, webbed memories.

Late May jottings...

"Did not come home."

"Did not teach today...

Did not come home."

"New York. Why no

Souvenirs brought back....?"

You and your fat *itch

Laughing...pointing...

Laughing...tied to the

Earth...never Eagles.

Grackle lawyers tip

Stepping

Around this marriage

Carcass...

Vulture flapping around

A divorce courtroom...

And I, the Mockingbird...

Forever.

A good diet, adultery.

Crow always forces

Wait loss.

Answer 1

I remember saying those very words, 'you and your fat *itch*'. I like the comparison very much.

Answer 2

nice=D

Answer 3

Such a lovely ending to good lovin' gone bad. Sweet to the ear is the mockingbirds song for the mockingbird can say "nevermore" as fluently as the raven, and a few other choice words as well.

Answer 4

No winners usually, other then the Grackles. make it worse.

Answer 5

Oh, man, been there, felt that!

Wish you had given me these words at the time to express it!

Perfect!

ma

Answer 6

I think I got the point! lol  The last stanza, a sneering chuckle type of ending.

Answer 7

To find a release through such a vehicle, you are superb even in the bitterness of these words.

Answer 8

Do not divorce me, oh, my darling...

On this our final day....

Sorry, reminded me of high noon....

nice little poem.

Answer 9

The bond of the Merchant of Venice, and Kramer Vs. Kramer.You sound a little angry today, hope nothing wrong w/ the rooster! : )

Answer 10

72? Not even close.

How do you keep an idiot in suspense?

Tell you next week.

Answer 11

Oh my, been there...fairly recently, too.  I bought a magnet for my refrigerator, it says "It's better to have loved and lost than to be married to that psychotic ba$tard forever"

Answer 12

Marriage Carcass and vultures flapping.. been there.. you have done well putting it to paper. Let him eat Crow..

Thank you

Answer 13

The ironic wordplay, "diet" and "wait loss" makes you soar high above the vultures. Keep being that mockingbird.