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What say to "What If Stars Were Once-Upon-A-Time..."?

by Guest55768  |  earlier

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And all I need is a star at night,

Clear, clean, concise,

Tickling silent wisps flying...

There, the comet of some

Galaxy,

Icing Theories, crackling

Laughter long past dreaming...

Our dreams were expensive...

Sky high now.

To ole Sol, merry ole soul,

When shed your tail...skin,

Monster comet comedian...

Loosed like a coiling snake

Against rocks...

And planet-eggs rattle

Music upon spheres...

Dying in fire,

Born in ice.

A star at night

We've all acquired,

Merry ole Sol...

Clean, cackling

Clear.

Space Snake...

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  1. You ask something that you already know the answer.

    AS A GROUP

    We don't answer how you feel

    If you weren"t a good poet

    Your words are well known

    Why f.k. up a good thing

    LEAVE THE Rooser alone

    HE'S ON HIS OWN!!!!

    AUSTRLILIA is where he speaks

    He tells no lies

    Read and wheep what the Rooster says

    He speaks the truth!!!


  2. well this is Spacey!

    and i like the snake part. :)

    i look up and see

    all those other time zones..


  3. I got the Sun in the mornin' and the Moon at night. You got the Solar System singin' to the Universe.


  4. This is very nice. I've always loved looking at the night sky. I remember when I was told that looking at the stars was looking back in time. I was so completely awestruck, and I've been looking ever since.  

  5. Space themes seems to be catching.  Another spaced out word-smith singing about the Solar system.  Great poem and imagery...very dream like.

  6. Watch the night sky for long and you will see many things that make your imagination soar to places of dreams.  A comet, the space snake, crawling through the galaxies with it's tail following.  Shooting stars, and even clouds of gaseous space goop floating like plankton in a sea of vacuum, waiting for a space whale to devour it.

  7. Shimmyshimmy Cocoa Pops

    Shinny shinny up a tree

    Fay is a comin

    For U and me



    Where oh where will we be

    Where is Da Rooster...

    Tell me...we'll see

    Rooster is leavin Benjii

    Next destination..Land of Oz

    Leavin China...

    for somewhere finer

    See you in Australia Folks !!!!!

    I Da Rooster!!

    Yaaaaaa!!!!

    Approved by Safety Officer:  Dum Num Nutz

  8. The dreams of distant galaxies and wondering "What is out there" Letting our imagination take over Thinking of the possibilities,,,, The what ifs,,, The unknown ,,,

    Nicely Done

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