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What say you to "Joshua" poem?

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In the years of black tap dancers and cotton bales,

Massah Jim had a boy...raised him from cypress knee

Height in the ways of the Earth,

Plantings, harvestings.

Massah Jim named him Joshua...gave him a hound

And grey Apaloosa that loved the rain and winds.

Joshua had eyes like a hungry hawk at noon...

Heard rustlings that cats ignored, late in the evening

Under river willows.

Joshua, the hound, and Apaloosa roamed through

October nights, when only owls were about.

Frost rimmed the windows when Joshua's mother died.

Massah Jim watched his boy grow quiet, then walked

In the library...closed the door behind him.

Joshua knew ancient trails where wisteria grew wild,

And waters remained dark under moss, sun.

He grew closer to the oaks than his father knew why...

Ventures became secretive, silent as a cottonmouth.

His footprints left no traces.

Slaves whispered. None would walk with Joshua

Through the cotton fields...or smile when he passed their

Cabins.

They feared the sounds of hoofbeats in a storm, begged

Old women to raise fires against the darkness.

Spring rains came with the fog. One misty morning, before

Roosters blinked, or the black cook yawned,

Joshua, the horse, and the hound were gone.

Massah Jim died in the library, brandy glass in his hand.

Slaves and lands auctioned. Crops sold. Steampaddles

Floated upriver past a desolate wharf.

Brambles crept around pillars, up the stairs, shrouded

Trees and roads. Floors fell through. Saplings grew into

Broken panes...once glowing with candlestick flames

Outlining whirling ladies, cigar-smoking gentlemen,

Servants passing delicacies.

In the years of Blue and Gray uniforms, as sparrows

Hatched their chicks in parlor walls,

Soldiers found the shadow form...a man, one gnarled hand

Around a brandy glass...

Seated in the library,

Close to the rain.

Close as a body could get.

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  1. A spirit of the woodlands, of the earth, of the black of nights.  Quite a tale spun round a name "Joshua".  A biblical reference to me.  The mystery deepened by your weaving his disappearance and then final reappearance.  I see what you mean about "float" upriver as they are slow and against a current almost look like they are floating with the current.  A nice read.


  2. Sad, beautiful and haunting. I know in the past the Mississippi did flow

    'up',

  3. Me and Br'er Rabbit...we lay low...

  4. That is some intense, realistically vivid imagery,,,

    the one stumble I encountered was

    "Steampaddles

    Floated upriver past a desolate wharf."

    It is nit pickin',,, but nothing floats upriver,,, they may float from upriver, or float downriver though.

    all in all, quite impressive

  5. A great story worthy of Louisiana, mythic and somber.  I love it!

  6. After reading this, I have only one comment.

    I want MORE!

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