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What should I name my

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poem?

I think I’ve fallen in love with you,

Will you catch me on the way?

I think my heart is aching now,

Just imagining you today

I think this poem’s silly, and I don’t know why it’s here,

But all I know is when I close my eyes; it’s your voice that I hear.

Your kisses mean the world to me, your hugs mean even more

And I think that sometimes baby, I want to come crash down your door.

Just to see your expression, or just to see your grin,

To give into you, to lie with you, just to let you win.

I’d hold you in my arms so tight and never let you go,

It’s as if you are my cupid, got me arrow, stem and bow.

And if my mouth did lead me, I’d give you one small kiss,

And in that tiny moment, I’d be in my heaven’s bliss.

I’d sit and watch you sleeping, your eyes shut ever so sweet,

I think I’d snuggle next to you, because I’d know. I was, complete.

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  1. Love Abyss

    the poem is great! i love it. truly i love it


  2. completed love, or fell from heaven... really good poem... is it about somebody??... hope i helped:)

  3. Gmina Rybno, Warmian-Masurian Voivodeship

    I don't think

  4. Beautiful poem. I loved it.

    "Baby"

    "Falling For you."

    "I love you"

    "You got me."

    "Honey."

    "Boo."

  5. that was a greatt poem. i would name it fallen like others have said. that wa such a good poem!!!!! gee i wish i could write like that =] good job!

  6. Fallen

    *I love poems if you want to read mind someday just email me and i give you one or send it to you*

  7. That was super adorable!! I smiled as soon as I started reading it =]]]]]

    how about

    *In the Moment

    *Head in the Clouds or My Head's in the Clouds

    *My Other Half

    *Perfection in a Poem

  8. Free falling.

  9. My dear "Jump X"...

    I am...IMPRESSED !! Very well "formulated" ! I really like your "thoughts" & the way you've expressed yourself. You sure have potential !!! Now ...I would like to present you several suggestions:

    1. )  "Fully human, Fully Alive"

    2. )  "A Reason to Live"

    3.)   "Speaking of Love"

    4.)   "Loving Each Other in Intimacy"

    I hope, you'll like "one" of them... Keep up the good work & who knows, maybe "one day" we can enjoy your publications ....You never know..what may come ahead...Wishing you many more creative "phases" & all the best for the future ! Greetings from Germany with all my live & care... Annette***

  10. very pretty...

    I'd name it from part of the poem like : "baby" or "heaven's bliss"

  11. 'My Love'

    'Fallen Angel'
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