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What should i end my poem with?

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it's my aunt's birthday today and i'm writing a poem to put on the back of the card . i need suggestion of what to put on the last verse.

The Aunt Recipe.

4 cups of love

2 1/2 Tbl. of good humor

1 Tbl. of care

1 tsp. of athleticism

Dash of ............

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  1. extreme happiness


  2. sarcasm

  3. a dash of spice!!

  4. I think you should make "4 cups of love" the last line. End strong, you know.

    And I think you should change "Dash of ..." to "16 ounces of wisdom" or something like that. Dash doesn't seem right when describing someone, especially when it is a good quality.

  5. i think you should change love to eternal happiness and put a dash of love.

  6. Gin

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