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What should i name my poem?

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For my writing class I had to write a poem about a tiger that was loose in a neighborhood and I can't come up with a name for it. Also you can tell me what you think of it.

Finally, free of that binding cage

All I want is to go home

The cold, dark pavement is so different from the jungle

But the starry night is the same

I am confused

I need something to fill the emptiness of my stomach

My vibrant fur shines under a bright street light

My pelt bloody

A stone shoved in my paw

A small child sits on a swing alone

He cannot see me

One strike of my paw and I would have food

Primal instincts start to take over

But I pause

Is it that I would be taking away someone's child

Like me being taken from my cubs

He looks at me

He is now frozen with fear and shock

I lay down

The pain spreading through my body

He comes near

My whiskers brush against him

He unexpectedly pulls out the stone

His mother shouts in the distance

He runs

I ponder not why he helped me

But why did i spare him?

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  1. Mercy.


  2. lost............

  3. How about naming your poem...CitraKaya...

    Indian for tiger....

    http://maikeru76.wordpress.com - My blog

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