What should i name this poem? what do u think of it?

Question

okay so i wrote a poem .....tell me what you think about it ..(don't be too harsh)

Oh so dramatic this may seem, but is it really?

i sit here alone closed off from this world.

i wish i could let go of the past , and just be bold.

if i showed you this writing, would you understand me , sincerely?

the decisions you made were best for you, but were they also best for me?

i will never really tell you what i think of you.

i sit here thinking, if only you knew

do you really believe your remarriage is my happiest memory?

We are mother and daughter ,where is the trust?

i try to tell you the truth , but you just sit there and judge

every insult you say just adds to this grudge

And do you know that i won't be there as you grow old and turn into dust?

And i just can't wait to be free.

Answer 1

well hunny

i think you should name it something that randomly comes to mind

an i like it but dont have other people tell you what to name your poems then its not the exact meaning your trying to portrey

Answer 2

I see where you're coming from with the frustrated at your parent thing. i, infact wrote a poem on it, aswell. I'm gonna give you some quotes from mine to help you out with ideas for the title. "Where did YOU go? I want you back", "You were my favourite", "Slipping through my fingers", "I fail, not like before", "Space of faint recollection", Years to come you'll find me a stranger, walk past and no hello?", "Everything's backwards; you're a child". There you go, see if anything springs to mind from that. good luck!

Answer 3

"Broken Bond"

(i know it's bad but...........)

Answer 4

There is a great deal of hurt in your poem and it comes through with strength.

I also find that I can express feelings through poetry, deep feelings that are difficult to express any other way.

It can be a vehicle to releasing negative feelings for some and I would think that you may find this yourself. It is a way of dealing with issues sometimes and can create a release mechanism for us.

Your poem is a deeply felt expression and as such is important to you. Nobody else can express your feelings for you and therefore do not have the right to alter or amend your words. If they truly express your feelings then they are as unique and as individual as you are.

Keep writing and do it your own way and in your own words and you may find some peace through the medium of poetry. I truly hope you can do that.