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What should my Vampire romance story be called?

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this is the first paragraph.

It was a cold, dark September evening, and i was sat in front of the blazing fire trying to keep warm. The electricity was out so the only light we had was the fire, and a couple of candles my mum had put around the house. My mum looks alot like me apart from the few grey hairs and laughter lines. She is loads prettier then me. She is 35 years old 20 years older then me. Her hair is curly like mine, but hers is a slightly darker brown, and her eyes are piercing blue unlike mine which are a soft caramel brown, which i must get from my father. I have never met my father, he left when i was very young. My mum says he was a handsome man, very intelligent yet very strong. She said he had a very sweet personality, and the only reason he left was because of business, but i can tell she still loves him.

its a vampire romance and i don't no what to call it can you help?

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  1. No offence , I don't want to be rude or anything , but for god's sake!

    Can you be more creative and original , because after Twilight , everyone wants to copy this series.

    Be yourself , there are more then zillion vampire/teen/romance/whatever books.

    xx Greetings


  2. You need to edit it loads... no offense but you jump around a lot and it doesnt make a lot of sense to me.  And your title will come when it wants to. you cant force it.

  3. I would title it...Let it Go.

  4. i dont really want to say it but.... thats really to much like twilight - try to be origanal

  5. You do need quite a bit of editing, because it doesn't really flow well and and follow on. The title will hit you, so be prepared. Don't push it.

  6. Well first off, you kinda jump around alot.  It doesn't flow the greatest.  And you should probably name it "Twilight: The Rip Off"

  7. I'm just going to say I wish you luck with another vampire novel, after the Stephanie Meyer Saga everybody wants to jump in the trunk of the success of vampire novels. Also make sure you get an excellent publisher to take your book to a whole new level, self published books don't really work in the market. Good Luck!!! :)

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